7 things your popup should say


Getting website visitors to subscribe is harder than ever.

While everyone’s tweaking popup colors and timing triggers, the real conversion problem is usually hiding in the copy itself.

Most popup copy is missing 7 specific elements that actually make someone want to subscribe. Most brands don’t even realize what’s missing.

I put together a quick checklist that shows you exactly which elements your popup is missing and how to add them today.

Here’s what’s inside:

  • 7 critical copy elements that turn browsers into subscribers
  • Real examples showing exactly what to say, and what not to say
  • A scoring system that reveals your biggest gaps
  • A before/after popup example with all 7 elements included
  • Quick fixes you can implement in the next hour

Run the 7-element popup copy checklist →

Totally free. No sign-up required.

This is for you if you have decent traffic but low signups, and you want to fix your popup copy without starting from scratch.

Until next time, see ya!

Gannon

P.S. Once your copy covers all 7 elements, the next question is whether the rest of your popup is pulling its weight. The 15-Minute Popup Audit Kit scores your entire popup across 86 points in 7 categories. Free, no opt-in required.

Grab the full Audit Kit →

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25+ DTC tech accessory brand popups audited — and the same five mistakes showed up every time. Real brands scored against the 7-category 15-Minute Popup Audit Kit, with specific fixes you can hand straight to your dev team. Your popup stops attracting discount hunters and starts attracting buyers who understand why you're worth full price. New here? Start with the free Popup Fix Kit — a 5-day email course covering the five mistakes I find in almost every audit. popupfixkit.com

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